Friday, 10 April 2015

OUGD505: Crit Feedback



Comments on research to date: 

  • Sex trafficking shocking statistics look at other areas of trafficking
  • Tackling a very serious but important issue. Have clearly looked into the variety of types of human trafficking - bring awareness to others about the scale as to what is happening and in what ways.


Areas for improvement:

  • Find how more people can relate
  • Make it personal, bring it to reality. Look at 'slavery is closer than you think' 


Areas for further development: 

  • Find target audience - what would you are producing be used for? focus on incidents in the UK. 
  • Compare to slavery - modern day form - how will you communicate this - make it more personal - speak on a personal level - think about format - delivery
  • Branding the people behind the trafficking. Create a campaign to widen the exposure of the issue and get people on board to support. 
  • expose and research British trafficking- find personal stories. Teach and raise awareness just how bad and how often is happens. 


Today's crit feedback was incredibly useful and I gained some great feedback. A point that was brought up was making the campaign UK based to expose British trafficking and raise awareness on how bad and how often it happens.

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