OUGD504: Crit Feedback//Target Audience//TOV

As a table we discussed and presented our ideas. Below are some points that were raised:

> Specify target audience/tone of voice/purpose
> Create a logo...'sacred geometry' ∆
> Scrolling side to side website, like hieroglyphics 
> Ways to make the website more interactive

Target Audience/Tone of Voice

The target audience is anyone interested in learning the basics of sacred geometry. The website is to inform and educate people about sacred geometry and ancient design. The site is almost a 'learners guide' which will affect the overall design. It will need to be clear and minimal and easy to navigate. Someone suggested the use of gif's to explain elements could be interesting (gif's can be produced in photoshop) 

The tone of voice will be informal and easy to understand. A basic outline explaining the symbols. Someone suggested that I look at existing websites on sacred geometry.

existing websites on sacred geometry

Below are some existing websites on sacred geometry they are pretty awful, too busy and not very clear. This raises the questions, How can I make mine more clearer and more informative? Also, how can I make my website easier to navigate around for a beginner.